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About Me Member Emotional Poet bleedblack613/Female/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 4 Years
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Everyone thinks i'm gonna kill myself!

Tue May 17, 2005, 10:52 AM
What the Fuck!!!...I put this poem in for my exam grade and here it is...

Depression is like the black
of a midnight sky,
Like the sond of a bullet
Being shot to kill.

Black is like the scent of rain,
falling and soaking up the dirt,
Like the touch of dead animal skin,
Laid on an old women's back,
Like the bitter taste of toxic fluids,
Shoved down your throat.

...Do you think thats disturbing...cuz my stupid teacher does...she sent he poem and a note to my parents saying to talk to me about it...before i even read the note i was asking my friends what they think she wrote in it...(i already knew it was something to do with my poem) and they said probally she said something about me being goth...and im like screaming at them im not goth...no one seems to understnd who i am!!!!...i hate it...now my parents are gonna give me this whole lame talk about the poem...all that gay shit...omg...its just a poem i wrote cause i thought it sounded good...im not gonna like fucking kill myself or anything...

Please read this and tell me if you think the poem is disturbing...Please im me my sn is xxFireAtWillxxx...i need someone to talk to...im like bursting out in tears ritte now cause no one seems to understand!!!

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Devious Info

  • Current Residence: pennsylvania...
  • Interests: mostly music art and poetry oh and reading. They are my magor things on life.
  • Favourite movie: The Crow. The Craft. Nightmare Before Christmas. Batman.
  • Favourite band or musician: My CheMical Romance. The used. Good Charlotte. HIM. AFI. Marilyn Manson
  • Favourite genre of music: rock...punk...heavy metal...emo...
  • Favourite artist: probally Gerard Way. He's the lead singer in MCR. and also did the album artwork for the CD!
  • Favourite poet or writer: Probally JK Rowling. and also Anne Rice...2 great writers of GREAT books
  • Favourite photographer: dont know much about photography
  • Favourite style of art: dont know?
  • Operating System: dont know?
  • MP3 player of choice: dont know?
  • Shell of choice: Turtle shell?
  • Wallpaper of choice: umm...dont know?
  • Skin of choice: Dont know. I;m white though if thats what your asking?
  • Favourite game: Dont play much games
  • Favourite gaming platform: Dont know. I have Game cube . but all the games they have suck. I wanna get Xbox.
  • Favourite cartoon character: Would Jack and Sally count?
  • Personal Quote: i Dont think i have one. Guess i need to get one then?
  • Tools of the Trade: i dont know?

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Comments


:iconcorruptjelly:
hello random deviant.. i like your gallery, you are very talented :)

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.......There is somthing seriously wrong here
:iconbleedblack6:
thankss!

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~jessica~
:iconbleedblack6:
ohh, i gotta a new deviant,,,its toxicxbeauty,,,if you wanted to know

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~jessica~
:iconbleedblack6:
Im going to the good charlotte and simple plan concert tomorrow!

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~jessica~
:iconmyrejectedromance:
i wrote 1 new one..... its fixed so yeah lol

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[Alex]isonfire<3
:iconbleedblack6:
alright

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~jessica~
:iconmyrejectedromance:
Ahhhhh, your poems are amazing lmao!!!

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[Alex]isonfire<3
:iconbleedblack6:
LoL...thanks...hope to read lots more of your poems too!!!

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~jessica~
:iconbleedblack6:
anyone has a ny comments on my poems?...tell me what you think...critism is not an insult to me it helps me get beter...tell me what you think...PLEASE!

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~jessica~
:iconulos-toivoa:
heyhey I like your work so far! Keep up the good work. I'm gonna have to keep an eye on you :)

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We are like soldiers marching through life only to die, and our body is but a bivouac for our mind and soul.
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A good friend will help you move. A really good friend will help you move a body. Let me know if I ever need to bring a shovel.

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